Kia Ora Petra, my name is Autumn and I am a student from Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post about how the body works & changes. I’ve learnt a lot. I had no clue that when you exercise your lungs grow bigger, How big do your lungs grow when you exercise, a lot or just a little? I never knew that when you exercise it makes your body happy. How does exercise make your body happy? If you had added some spaces after you had used punctuation then your writing would make a bit more sense. Other than that I really enjoyed your blog post.
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ReplyDeleteKiaora Petra my name is Sheldon from Kawakawa Primary School, I enjoyed your information it was very intresting.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Petra, my name is Autumn and I am a student from Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post about how the body works & changes. I’ve learnt a lot. I had no clue that when you exercise your lungs grow bigger, How big do your lungs grow when you exercise, a lot or just a little? I never knew that when you exercise it makes your body happy. How does exercise make your body happy? If you had added some spaces after you had used punctuation then your writing would make a bit more sense. Other than that I really enjoyed your blog post.
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